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Wikipedia's peer review process is a way to receive ideas and feedback from other editors about articles. An article may be nominated by any user, and will appear on the list of all peer reviews. Other users can comment on the review. Peer review may be used for potential good article nominations, potential featured article candidates, or an article of any "grade". Peer review is a useful place to centralise a review from other editors about an article, and may be associated with a WikiProject; and may also be a good place for new Wikipedians to receive feedback on how an article is looking.

Peer reviews are open to any feedback, and users requesting feedback may also request more specific feedback. Unlike formal nominations, editors and nominators may both edit articles during the discussion. Compared to the real world peer review process, where experts themselves take part in reviewing the work of another, the majority of the volunteers here, like most editors in Wikipedia, lack expertise in the subject at hand. This is a good thing, it can make technically-worded articles more accessible to the average reader. Those looking for such expert input should consider inviting editors from the subject-wise volunteers list or notifying at relevant WikiProjects.

To request a review, or nominate an article for a review see the instructions page. Users are limited to requesting one review at any one time, and are encouraged to help reduce the backlog by commenting on other articles. Any user may comment on a review, and there is no requirement that any comments may be acted on.

A list of all current peer reviews, with reviewer's comments included, can be found here. For easier navigation, a list of peer reviews, without the reviews themselves included, can be found here. A chronological peer reviews list can be found here.

Arts[edit]

Margaret (singer)

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Kazon[edit]

The above article is about a fictional alien race in the Star Trek franchise. I would like to put this through the FAC process sometime in the future, but I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism or feedback on how to improve the article to its best possible condition prior to doing so. Thank you in advance! Aoba47 (talk) 06:26, 29 December 2017 (UTC)


Rebel Heart[edit]

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I believe in terms of structure and content, this is very close to the FA standard. However, might need some extra pair of eyes. I would want a peer review mainly on the prose and some spotchecks and just to make sure that there is no close paraphrasing that comes under plagiarism. Thanks, —IB [ Poke ] 12:32, 21 December 2017 (UTC)

Comments by Tintor2 (talk) 18:05, 24 December 2017 (UTC)' Good work in this article. It covers probably everything about this single. There are few things I would advise:

  • While the manual of style says the four paragraph is the limit for the lead, I found this article's lead too detailed. Try trimming some parts like "Australia, Austria, Belgium, Canada, the Czech Republic, Germany, Hungary, Italy, the Netherlands, Portugal, Spain, and Switzerland, while reaching the top five in Croatia, Denmark, Finland, France, Greece, Ireland, Mexico, Norway, Poland, Scotland, the United Kingdom, and the United States" with instead "multiple countries" while focusing mostly on English regions since this is the English Wikipedia
  • All references need to be archived for FAs so I used the archive bot on this article. However, I think there is one dead url.
  • Personnel seems to leave a lot of blank space which might leave a bad impression to reviewers. I would suggest reorganizing but I'm not an expert in this project so I leave it to you.

Other than that I see no massive issues. If you have time one of these days could you also comment in own peer review? Cheers and Merry Christmas.Tintor2 (talk) 18:05, 24 December 2017 (UTC)


Occult Classic[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because Occult Classic is the largest page i've created and I want to know how to improve it.

Thanks, Micro (Talk) 06:47, 20 December 2017 (UTC)

Comments from dnllnd[edit]

Hey! Congratulations on creating your first longer form page. Here are a few general comments about the structure and style of the page:

  • The citations in the lead can be dialed back since there isn't anything present that's likely to be challenged. MOS:LEADCITE is a good reference for drafting a page intro.
  • Thoughtful and contextually driven quotations are a good addition to any article, but the number and extent of those included in the Background and composition section veer into quote farm territory. Paraphrasing what you've included into shorter digestible sentences will pull the page inline with the spirit of an encyclopedia and make it easier for people to scan. MOS:QUOTE includes suggestions about how and when to use quotations. In this case, it makes sense to include commentary about the album's development, but they would have a greater impact if used more judiciously.
  • Reception and release section: Make sure to include links to relevant Wikipedia pages to help explain who people and sites you reference are - not all readers are going to be familiar with the genre of music and related figures. For example, what is EDM.com? Who is Michael Sundius? What is Dancing Astronaut? If there aren't relevant pages to link to, include a brief note explaining who or what the are.
  • Alt Classic subheading: Italicize heading.
  • Generally the page would benefit from having more of a narrative flow. Right now much of the information is included as standalone nuggets rather than points that naturally follow each other. Cutting back on the use of quotes might help on this front. You may also want to consider comparing and contrasting reaction to the album as a way of weaving things together. It may also be useful to find a few pages that are more developed for other albums you like that can be used as guides.
  • Consider centralizing references you've used multiple times by naming them so that it's readily obvious to readers how many references come from each source. It can be done using the Cite menu in either the RefToolbar or the Visual Editor.--Dnllnd (talk) 01:45, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Alfred Hitchcock

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Regine Velasquez

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Salsa Big Band[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate Salsa Big Band to GA (the album recently won the Latin Grammy Award for Album of the Year) and I think the prose can be improved. Thanks, Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:36, 22 November 2017 (UTC)

Comments by Mike Christie[edit]

I'm copyediting as I read through; please fix anything I mess up.

  • All the arrangements were helmed by Roberto Delgado at the end of 2015, and went to record the album on January 2017: "helmed" is jargon/elegant variation; I'd change it to something more straightforward. However, there is something wrong with the syntax here. If "helmed" means "produced" or "created", how can the album not have been recorded until 2017? And I don't follow "went to" -- the subject of "went" is "arrangements"; what does it mean to say "the arrangements went to record the album"?
  • The long quotes at the end of the repertoire section aren't that easy to read; this is all in Delgado's voice, of course, since it's his quote. I think it would be better to put this in Wikipedia's voice, and use the quotes for illustration. Something like "Blades wanted to "recover the sounds of the great bands", said Delgado, who felt that the need for a large orchestra to create the sound Blades wanted discouraged artists from trying to reproduce the big band sound. "Traveling with such large orchestra is a problem", according to Delgado. Twenty musicians..."

I can't tell whether the coverage is complete, but I think this is in fairly good shape and would probably get through GA. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:50, 17 December 2017 (UTC)


The Room (film)[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because the article recently passed GA review and I hope to get this article to FAC status. It has been getting increasingly more views this last year because of The Disaster Artist film coming out in December and I think it is a bizarrely interesting topic.

Thanks, Jeanjung212 (talk) 15:50, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

I archived all references using archive box but there are still some issues that might bother reviewers:

  • Avoid references and quotes in the lead per the manual of style. Focus on generalizatons in the lead as it is meant to introduce readers to the article rather than pinpoint certain facts.
  • Avoid small paragraphs.
  • The video game appears to be fanmade so I suggest removing it unless it is notable. Same with music.
  • "In popular culture" might be the trickiest section. While there are many people who know of the Nostalgia Critic, general readers might not care about the reviews, among others. Unless any of these mentions are notable I might advise you to remove them.

That's all I see. If you have free time could you check my peer review? Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 20:02, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Beatriz Romilly[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because whilst I have listed the subject's career and a brief overview, I feel it might require some further input from editors more experienced in writing articles about actors.

Thanks, Osarius - Want a chat? 11:02, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

First, the strong points. The article's well structured and "well-cited", in the sense of having a decent number of citations. The absence of a photo is a pity. But the key problem's already been identified in the tag - there are nowhere near enough reliable secondary sources used to indicate that Ms Romilly warrants an article. To elaborate:

  • Source 1 is her own, self-published cv;
  • Sources 2 and 3 are commercial, promotional, casting websites;

I really don't think these meet the criteria for reliable secondary sources.

  • Source 5 is the Globe advertisement for the show and does nothing but list Ms Romilly as a cast member;
  • Which leaves Source 4, the Guardian review. This describes Ms Romilly's performance as "feisty" and "peppery". It's exactly what you need, but it is the only cite, amongst about 57, that, I would suggest, meets the criteria for reliability and notability.

In a nutshell, there's not nearly enough to justify an article on the grounds of notability. If you can find more like Source 4, then throw them in. But a quick Google search suggests that will be a struggle. In which case, I just don't think the article is warranted. Can I ask why you think that it is? KJP1 (talk) 21:34, 2 November 2017 (UTC)

Comments from dnllnd[edit]

I agree with @KJP1:. The page lacks reliable secondary sources, relying too heavily on Romilly's CV and third-party aggregate sites. The page would benefit from better sources and, if possible, more biographical information. Possible areas of interest that would align with biographies of living persons guidelines might be family history, upbringing or training. I did a quick Google search and didn't hit on anything promising, but I wonder if there may be more substantive coverage in Spanish media that could be used in keeping with WP:NOENG?--Dnllnd (talk) 00:39, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Everyday life[edit]

Oxenfree

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Engineering and technology[edit]

Ice drilling[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I plan to take it to WP:FAC, and would like to get feedback on the article first.

Thanks -- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:50, 14 December 2017 (UTC)


General[edit]

Magnus Carlsen[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because it has been a "good article" for over four years and I want to know if there are any improvements that could be made to it or if it is near "featured article" quality.

Thanks, Hrodvarsson (talk) 02:07, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

  • Four instances of cites using deprecated parameter |trans_title=   Lingzhi ♦ (talk) 01:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
@Lingzhi: I have replaced trans_title with trans-title. Hrodvarsson (talk) 04:03, 8 November 2017 (UTC)


Monaco: What's Yours Is Mine

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University of Oxford[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I think it's potentially a candidate for WP:FA status. A peer review is a step towards it becoming WP:FAC.

Thanks, Bellezzasolo Discuss 20:08, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


Monterey Bay Aquarium[edit]

I rewrote this article from scratch over the course of about a year, leading up to GA status, and have never written on WP so extensively before, so I am open to all nitpick-y feedback… prose, formatting, organization/layout, images, references, etc. I am interested in bringing it to FAC. I've recently commented on two PR requests (1, 2). Thanks! Rhinopias (talk) 00:55, 4 January 2018 (UTC)


Geography and places[edit]

Level Mountain[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I believe in terms of structure and content, this is very close to the FA standard. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated.

Thanks, Volcanoguy 21:12, 31 December 2017 (UTC)


Hong Kong[edit]

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because most parts of the article have been exhaustively rewritten and rechecked over the past month and I'm looking to have it re-listed as FA.

Thanks, Horserice (talk) 01:45, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Eluru[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because, it have had gone under major constructive edits from 2016. After experienced editors gave me some suggestions, I'll correct/add them and will submit this article to GA nomination.

Thanks, IM3847 (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

There are some issues I found while reading this article.

  • Per the manual of style the lead should summarize everything in this article so I would suggest expand it to at least two paragraphs.
  • Avoid small sections (for example: Etymology only has two sentences).
  • There are times when tables and images clash with the text. Try rearranging them
  • Notable personalities is unsourced.
  • Some references need formatting.

Anyway, good luck with the article. If possible, would you comment on my peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 19:51, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


History[edit]

Murder of Yvonne Fletcher[edit]

Yvonne Fletcher was a bright and popular young police officer who was shot in the back by a gunman firing from a first floor window of the Libyan embassy in London. It marked the start of an eleven-day siege, six Britons being held hostage in Tripoli for nine months and a break in diplomatic relations between the UK and Libya that lasted until 1999. The police investigation has never closed, and they have strong suspicions on the identify of the gunmen and the co-conspirators, some of their evidence can not be released in court because of national security. It's a shabby story for Fletcher's family, who have never been able to see Yvonne's killer brought to justice. This article has been over-hauled recently and—unless reviewers advise otherwise—a further review at FAC is an option after PR. All constructive comments are welcome. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 21:50, 3 January 2018 (UTC)


James K. Polk

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Nero Julius Caesar[edit]

Previous peer review

Looking for ideas to improve this article before taking it to GAN. If possible, promoting it above start class would be appreciated as well.

Thanks, SpartaN (talk) 10:30, 25 December 2017 (UTC)


German destroyer Z39[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to FA. I had previously nominated it, but it was pointed out to me that it lacked a lot of context. I have built up the context and backround info a lot since then, and want to see if people think it is ready for FAC, or if it needs a lot more work.

Thanks, Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 06:33, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Hello, I'm pretty sure this article could become FA in the future but there are few things that bother me:
  • Red links tend to be discouraged (unless the article exists in another wikipedia)
  • I would recommend expanding the lead just a bit.
  • Most of the first section are only one paragraph long. I would suggest splitting them into two with each paragraph having its own theme.
  • Done where possible. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Every reference is a book. While readers might have to take good faith, I suggest searching for online sources too to make reviewers approve it. Maybe Google Books has some of them.
    Google Books has quite a few in preview or snippet view. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Good luck with the article. If possible could you comment in this peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 20:16, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Deportation of the Crimean Tatars[edit]

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to upgrade it to at least a "good article", maybe even a "featured article". The last time, nobody bothered to do a review, so I am submitting it again. And I'm going to keep submitting it, again and again and again, until someone has the courtesy to review it. Please, help me out, I would be very grateful.

Thanks, Seiya (talk) 09:26, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

Meh, bag WP:PR. I'm taking Bengal Famine of 1943 to WP:GA, where they may or may not give the best advice, but at least they will do something.  Lingzhi ♦ (talk) 12:53, 11 December 2017 (UTC)


Croxton Play of the Sacrament[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like suggestions on how to make this article better.

Thanks, Jre1991 (talk) 04:49, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Well there are some issues that I found so I hope you can improve the article based on them:

  • The lead should be expanded to at least two paragraphs as it meant to serve as a introduction to all the article's sections.
  • Some section should also be further expanded. If not possible, I would advise combining them.
  • Remember to reference every single paragraph per WP:Verifiability.
  • Characters section is unsourced as well as summary
  • Avoid the vimeo link at Performance History and instead transform it into a reference.
  • The summary might be rearranging. I would request help to the guild of copyeditors.

I hope this helps. If you have free time I wonder if you could check my peer review. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 20:10, 30 December 2017 (UTC)


Natural sciences and mathematics[edit]

Language and literature[edit]

Sasuke Uchiha

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Philosophy and religion[edit]

Social sciences and society[edit]

Phillips Exeter Academy Library[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review to prep it for FA nomination.

Thanks, alphalfalfa(talk) 02:40, 29 November 2017 (UTC)


Lists[edit]

List of Tau Kappa Epsilon brothers[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review for helpful feedback on making it a featured list. I'm still somewhat new to Wikipedia and have been working on this list for the past month or so, and I would like this page to be my first major contribution on improving a list to featured status. Some of my particular concerns are:

- Is it necessary to have any person have a reference? www.tke.org has a page with a lot of the distinguished alumni if it's necessary to fill most of the entries but I have avoided that reference and have stuck to more specific references. - Does my lead need to be longer? I can copy a lot of the Tau Kappa Epsilon page information over, but I avoided it because of duplicate information. - Are the category headers good headers?

Let me know what I need to do to fix the article for featured list nomination.

Thanks, Jmnbqb (talk) 04:46, 21 December 2017 (UTC) jmnbqb (December 20, 2017)


Featured lists aren't exactly my area but I'd still recommend

  • Expanding the lede to summarize the list's contents. Perhaps a bit on what areas have the greatest representation, any connections between the figures or major class years or colleges in common. Don't duplicate content from the main page but give an overview of the group of alumni.
  • Double-checking for Proper Nouns—I saw more than a few terms that should have been lowercase
  • Every entry should have a reference and reliable, secondary sources (e.g., newspapers and magazines) are the best sources, as they have no affiliation with the frat

(not watching, please {{ping}}) czar 04:55, 29 December 2017 (UTC)


Kollegah discography[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I wanted to get help. My goal is to get this article promoted to a Featured list.

Thanks, Lee (talk) 21:12, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


Billboard Latin Music Award for Hot Latin Song of the Year[edit]

I've listed this article for peer review because I want it to be a featured list.

Thanks, Brankestein (talk) 23:02, 14 December 2017 (UTC)


List of countries in the Junior Eurovision Song Contest[edit]

This article has been improved drastically since April this year to emulate the List of countries in the Eurovision Song Contest. I rolled out the changes a day ago and I believe that this article is potentially suitable for a featured list nomination. The relevant updates have been listed here. If you review the article, feel free to ask me to edit an article of your choice in return. Thank you. — Tuxipεdia(talk) 03:40, 29 November 2017 (UTC)


WikiProject peer-reviews[edit]