roasting chestnuts –
smoke plumes rise though bare branches
scent and taste of fall
Pat R
Inspired by:
colored leaves
struggling with the wind
dance through the street
© Chèvrefeuille
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #19 as is above; as below
“.. Simply said: “the first line and the third line exhibit a connectedness or a completeness”. Some say one should be able to read the first line and the third line to find it makes a complete thought ..”
For Carpe Diem Haiku
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/11/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-19.html?m=1
11/18/15
