As many of you know, I've been a little bit ignorant of this blog... unfortunately for both you and I... so in trying to get back into the habit, and because I'm experimenting with something new, I thought you might find this enjoyable. Currently the writer's group that I attend is learning how to write screenplays. This is a recreation of a short story that was published on Michael Solender's
You're Not From Here Are You Blog. Be warned though, formatting may look a little funny, that's because blogger doesn't convert word very well in these situations...
FADE IN:
INT. BANK
- DAY
Tellers are assisting various
customers and many are waiting in line while others are
filling out transaction slips, KRISTIE, a
late 20s something with light brown hair
and
average build rummages through her purse for the check she's to deposit and
the Fifty she
needs to break near the transaction island with her daughter MADISON,
kindergarten age
with long blond hair...
MADISON
(Tugging
on her mother's shirt)
Mom,
I'm hungry! Can we go to McDonald's please?
KRISTIE
(Pulls
out check to be deposited)
Not now
Madison, we have a couple of stops first. Stop
tugging on
my shirt!
MADISON
But mom-
KRISTIE
(Abruptly
cuts off Madison)
No Maddie,
and if you don't stop you won't get
McDonalds at
all.
Three men dressed in black enter the
bank pushing a woman on the ground holding
semi automatic rifles. BANK ROBBER #1 seems to be in charge.
BANK
ROBBER #1
(Calmly
walking to the Teller's Counter)
Everybody
down on the ground NOW! This is a robbery,
move and you
will be SHOT, sneeze and you will be
SHOT,
anything stupid AND YOU WILL BE SHOT!
Whimpers can be heard from around
the room as people drop to the marble floor. BANK
ROBBER #2 and BANK ROBBER #3 move to cover both exits.
BANK
ROBBER #1 (CONT'D)
(Shouting
and waiving his gun)
Are we
clear?!
Customers and tellers can be seen
nodding, some customers are begging to cry. Bank
Robber #1 points his gun at the teller wearing a manager tag.
BANK
ROBBER #1 (CONT'D)
(Tosses
two duffle bags at a teller)
You, fill up
these bags and be quick about it, if the cops
come, we
will shoot every person here.
Manager nods and begins filling the
bags provided by Bank Robber #1.
MADISON
(Afraid
and holding tightly to her mother whispering)
Mom? Are
those bad buyers going to hurt us?
Kristie is lying on the floor, her
hand inconspicuously replacing her money back into
her purse and digging for something else)
KRISTIE
(Smiling
reassuringly at Madison)
No Maddie, I
won't let them.
MADISON
How mom?
They have really big guns!
Kristie pulls out her concealed .357
revolver.
KRISTIE
Madison, be
quiet please.
Kristie tries to hide herself and
Madison behind the transaction island and checks her gun again. She counts her bullets, seeing only
five. She assesses the gunman from
around the corner of the island. A waiting CUSTOMER #1, a 30 something, large
built black man with lots of bling jumps up and rushes at Bank Robber 3.
CUSTOMER
#1
(Running
at Gunman Yells)
Enough of
this you bastards!
Gun shots litter the air, Kristie
peaks around the island and sees the would-be hero lying in a pool of spreading blood. Cries can be
heard mixing with panicking whispers.
BANK
ROBBER #3
(Waiving
his rifle scans the crowd)
Any of you
make a move like he did and you're all fucking
dead! Got
that?
Whimpers of acknowledgement emanate
from the victims.
MADISON
(Tears
streak her face)
Moma, I'm
scared!
KRISTIE
(Places
fingers to her mouth)
Shhh. It's
okay Madison
Kristie looks down at her gun trying
to make a decision.
KRISTIE (CONT'D)
I'll save
you, be super quiet now and cover your ears.
Madison rolls into a ball and covers
her ears while Kristie looks around the island again
at the three robbers. Bank Robber #1 is still pushing the manager to fill both bags while Bank
Robbers 2 and 3 point their guns at the victims and listen for sirens.
Kristie points her gun at Bank Robber #3, takes a slow breath and then exhales
pulling the trigger. Bank Robber #3 drops to the ground. Bank Robber #2 runs to his
side. Kristie can only hear her pounding heart. She aims again at Bank Robber
#2, exhales and fires again then shuffles behind the island and looks down at
Madison. Dying breaths can be heard from Bank Robber #2. Bank Robber #1 is now
panicking and waving his gun making his way towards the exit closest to Kristie
with both bags filled with money in one hand. Kristie tries to calm her shaking
hands, fires and misses. She takes aim again and shoots Bank Robber #1 in the chest.
He crumples to the floor.
KRISTIE
(Touches
Madison on the arm)
Madison,
it's safe now, come on, lets go.
Madison slowly gets to her feet,
eyes wide at seeing all of the carnage. Customers and tellers look at Kristie with relief as she puts
her gun back into her purse. Kristie
and Madison make their way to Bank Robber #1.
KRISTIE (CONT'D)
(Picking
up duffle bags next to Bank Robber #1)
I'm going
outside to call the police; you guys should stay here.
INT.
BEDROOM - NIGHT
Kristie sits at her dressing table
getting ready for bed, the television set to the evening news plays in the background.
Madison is asleep on Kristie's bed. Kristie looks
at herself in the mirror admiring her new hair cut and color. She glances at Madison,
her hair now cut short and dark brown. A press conference comes on the television
and Kristie turns to watch.
MISC
JOURNALIST
(Waives
his hand to have his question answered first)
Can you tell
us what you know about the suspect?
POLICE
SPOKESMAN
I can tell
you that our witnesses have all confirmed that the
suspect is a
woman, about five feet five inches tall with light
brown
hair and of medium build with a young child who has
long blond
hair.
A stream of Sir's can be heard from
every part of the surrounding crowd along with flashes of cameras taking
photos.
MISC
JOURNALIST
You mean to
tell us Sir, that this first class robbery was done
by a woman
and a little girl?
POLICE
SPOKESMAN
Based on eye
witness accounts, yes, that would be correct.
MISC
JOURNALIST
Do you know
who she might be?
POLICE
SPOKESMAN
I'm sorry,
no further questions at this time.
Kristie turns back to her mirror and
looks at her reflection again.
KRISTIE
(Speaking
to her reflection)
First class
robbery done by a woman...
Kristie Sighs
KRISTIE (CONT'D)
Who would
have guessed?
FADE TO BLACK.
THE
END