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AoDespair
Baltimore, MD
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Author, journalist, and TV writer/producer. Angriest Man in Television is faint praise indeed.
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David Simon
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Have shot there. San Juan. Excellent crew.
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My editor, Rebecca Corbett, read the copy through the first time and actually got sad: "You wrote your own goodbye." Yup.
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Furtively, in writing the Worden-Davis farewell to Homicide, I wrote my own goodbye to The Sun. I’d taken a buyout and that was my last byline. Some of that verbiage was camouflaged; me reflecting on the end of my own gig.
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Kevin Davis, a legend of Stanton’a shift!
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If you think the BPD of 1995-2008 was the same department of 2010-2019 -- or that a decade of mass arrest, corner-clearing and drug-warring didn't teach a generation of cops the wrong things and transform that department in profound ways, you're thin enough for Twitter certainly. twitter.com/NoahShachtman/…
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Knowing some four year olds, you give yourself too much credit. twitter.com/Crash_Craig/st…
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David Simon
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That’s not writing. It’s accounting. It has the narrative force of an emptied notebook.
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And you think the words “he said” deliver some greater margin of veracity? Ok. I know they taught us that in newswriting 101. I unlearned it the moment I wanted to tell a story of what it felt like to be a firefghter, rather than a story of a reporter interviewing a firefighter.
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David Simon
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Nah. I worked with a lot of smart people. All of us were taught the rules of quote-and-attribution as gospel. It was then a next-step journey to learn when to break those rules.
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David Simon
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You've not read carefully enough. Go back two tweets. Observed dialogue between people? Quote the hell out of it. That's real people in the world, being. Quotes delivered to reporters. That's the opposite. It's dead weight. Use the facts only.
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David Simon
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...i.e.
1) Moving closer to the flames, Johnson could feel his lungs tightening. He was gasping at each breath.
2) As Johnson moved toward the flames, "I could feel my lungs tightening. I was gasping for air," he said.
Both accurate. #1 is writing, #2 newswriting.
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David Simon
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14 may. |
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True. And in writing narrative my overarching rule was this: Dialogue BETWEEN people observed candidly? Quote the hell out of it. They're in the world, being. Dialogue told to a REPORTER. No quote. Use it as if you know the character's mind...
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David Simon
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14 may. |
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Fair to say. I do much of my tweeting in scout and crew vans.
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14 may. |
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Right. That's the word I used. Genocide. And I love it. That's what I said. Yeah, I sure do love me some genocide.
Easiest block of the day comes early. twitter.com/martianmemory/…
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David Simon
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14 may. |
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I’ll bite, Justin: The very structure of the attributed quote is one reason why many journalists, even when in possession of greater narratives than novels, do not deliver literature. Lose more quotes, imply obvious attributions and in more intimate language write a real story. twitter.com/justin_fenton/…
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David Simon
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14 may. |
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Pro Tip: Figure out what the fuck you're talking and you won't 1) misconstrue the value of a show's production budget to a state with show's viewership, which matters not to same & 2) confuse immediate ratings with long-term viability in a streaming premium cable model. twitter.com/molratty/statu…
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David Simon
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14 may. |
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On the very day when this pratfalling stumblefuck of empty-suited ego has managed to wipe out a trillion dollars of wealth in a market freefall linked to his trade war with China, he is rushing around taking credit for baseball box scores. So noted. twitter.com/realDonaldTrum…
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David Simon
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Am shooting in NJ presently.
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David Simon
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2 of 2. “No way in hell.” A Jewish producer asked, wearily: “Is this about the anti-Semitism?” He sounded put-upon. I added: “As an oven-dodger from way back, l gotta say that life is short.” They were disappointed in me. Like I’d dropped a deuce on The Ivy patio or something.
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